8 issues need attention. Fixing the description and the screenshots would lift this score the most: an estimated 12 points.
Needs attention · 8
Your first fix is free. The full report has 7 more fixes and 8 recommendations.
What we saw
Short description: 'Hike, climb, and soar through the peaceful mountainside landscapes of Hawk Peak Provincial Park as you make your way to the summit.' About the Game: 'Hike, climb, and soar through the peaceful mountainside landscapes of Hawk Peak Provincial Park.' - nearly identical opening.
What it costs you
The 'About the Game' section opens with the exact same sentence as the short description ('Hike, climb, and soar through the peaceful mountainside landscapes of Hawk Peak Provincial Park...'). A player who read the short description and scrolled down gets zero new information in the opening line, which is the highest-value real estate on the page. There's no mention of the game's charm points that reviewers and players actually praise - the sense of freedom, the emotional payoff of reaching the summit, its short length as a feature (2-3 hours), or the tone/comfort factor that makes it a beloved cozy classic. This is a missed opportunity to convert an already-interested browser into a wishlist/buy.
The fix
Rewrite the opening of the About the Game section to add new information instead of repeating the short description - lead with something like 'A cozy, open-ended adventure you can finish in an afternoon' and mention its acclaim (82 Metacritic, beloved by 19k+ reviewers) plus what makes it emotionally memorable.
7 more fixes worth up to +16 points, and 8 recommendations
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Which screenshot goes first
The order for your 7 screenshots, and what is missing.
Proof it worked
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Walk your page as a shopper, and a PDF
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“It helped me notice that my screenshots were all very dark, a quick fix with a big effect.”
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Looking good · 1
Compared with 82 released Adventure Steam pages
- TrailerOne trailer on the page.1 · median 2
Your capsule where shoppers meet it
Every placement is drawn at Steam's real size. Nothing here is scaled.
616 × 353 px: actual size
Your 7 screenshots, in store order
Steam shows four or five before a shopper has to press an arrow. Most never do.
Come back after you edit
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The other 7 fixes and 8 recommendations, written for this page
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