8 issues need attention. Fixing the description and the screenshots would lift this score the most.
Needs attention · 8
Your first fix is free. The full report has 7 more fixes and 8 recommendations.
What we saw
Short desc: 'Hack and slash? Check. Twin-stick-shooter? Check...' vs About the Game opening: 'a co-op action game that blends twin-stick shooter, hack and slash and drops in a dash of character customization & progression' - near-duplicate phrasing within seconds of each other.
What it costs you
The 'About the Game' section opens by re-stating almost word-for-word what's already in the short description ('a co-op action game that blends twin-stick shooter, hack and slash and drops in a dash of character customization'), wasting the critical first few seconds a player spends deciding whether to keep reading. The rest of the page is dominated by numerous embedded videos with awkward spacing (multiple stacked <br> tags, videos with height=100 that appear broken/cut off), pushing actual persuasive text far down the page. A player skimming will see a wall of video placeholders before reaching any compelling text about builds, bosses, or replayability.
The fix
Rewrite the opening paragraph of the detailed description to lead with a fresh hook distinct from the short description (e.g. focus on the '30+ contracts, 15+ bosses, 5 classes' scope immediately), trim redundant video embeds down to 3-4 well-chosen ones, and fix the malformed video containers (several show height=100 suggesting broken/cropped embeds).
7 more fixes and 8 recommendations
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Which screenshot goes first
The order for your 7 screenshots, and what is missing.
Proof it worked
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Walk your page as a shopper, and a PDF
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“It helped me notice that my screenshots were all very dark, a quick fix with a big effect.”
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Looking good · 1
Compared with 88 released Action Steam pages
- Trailer4 trailers on the page.4 · median 2
Your capsule where shoppers meet it
Every placement is drawn at Steam's real size. Nothing here is scaled.
616 × 353 px: actual size
Your 7 screenshots, in store order
Steam shows four or five before a shopper has to press an arrow. Most never do.
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The other 7 fixes and 8 recommendations, written for this page
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